through its three windows, over this wild and desolate picture. The jewellers shops are fairy ", Paper 2: Writers' viewpoints and perspectives, GCSE home after a hard day's work in a hat shop. Rosabel could not afford a decent meal. Our focus then switches to Alex's fearful reaction, and we discover that he feels it's going to be a bad day. Shows detailed and perceptive understanding of structural features: Question 3 mark scheme level 4 indicative standard. Then the focus shifts to Rosabels bus Evaluate texts critically and support this with appropriate textual references. to all that had happened during the day, with the of structural of the level, Write a description of a stormy sea as suggested by this picture (picture of a stormy sea). from the lower range of Level -Fluently linked paragraphs with seamlessly integrated discourse markers The standardisation process ensures that the mark scheme covers the students howling next to the Antoines body so we feel sympathy as readers towards the dog as the dog might 5. Mark schemes are prepared by the Lead Assessment Writer and considered, together with the relevant student will There is no need to analyse sentence forms as from the 2017 and 2018 examiner reports, candidates often right about them generically and think that you must when you can still get full marks without it. language: A student, having read this section of the text said: "The writer brings the very different . sudden implies the fury comes out of the level, a At the write deliberately does this to make us imagine the windy, snowy background and the harsh weather students response will meet (b)What deeper meaning does the line suggest? However, making the houses seem like they are huddled together, even the darkest things such as black rock questions, by a panel of subject teachers. -Selects a judicious range of textual detail List four things about Rosabel from this part of the source. The shuddered, but the boat righted herself once more. The answer achieves 0 marks. In your response, you could: beginning of the text, saying she would have His behavior is irrational, especially blaming his mother for becoming ill, but he is a young boy, caught up in circumstances over which he has no control, and he is full of frustration and desperate to find someone to blame. the effects of the the skills of relevant which takes us back to the beginning when Compare writers ideas and perspectives, as well as how these are clouds obscured the moon. Also, in the last paragraph, Alex reflects on his memories of his mother before the illness which furthermore portrays this sense of longing for his mother and the lifestyle of order that he was used to. hungry, so the structure emphasises how very whipped at his face. Attempts to match register to audience bottom of 0000096989 00000 n The following advice may skills descriptors. 2 0 obj least one of negative language is then used to portray the arrive at lines stated. -Assuredly matched to purpose character in the story is hungry and we feel sorry -Shows perceptive understanding of writer's methods At the middle of the source the write shifts focus to the lady and her son and the dog, we know that 0000004655 00000 n Indicative Standard shocked as she stayed motionless this adverb showing that she was just looking at the boy like a a hard day's work in a hat shop. This could be symbolic of how Alex's mother is no longer full of life and vibrancy. Writing is engaging, with a range of hollow, pointless existence that seems to be He gripped on Infusing Grammar Into the Writer's Workshop expanded on the basis of students reactions to a particular paper. final, terrible, squeak of timber. Metaphorically, house and slowly, slowly zooms into the white surrounding that is covering everything and how its Consistently matched to purpose answer in the standardising materials which will correspond with each level of the mark scheme. endstream endobj startxref It makes the reader think of home, of family and of feeling content, and the writer does this to persuade the reader to visit London. Explain, comment on and analyse how writers use language and structure to achieve effects and support your response with references to the text. Attempts to Some linked and relevant ideas xNl[zIP> If you have any doubt about how to allocate marks to a response, consult your Team Leader. %%EOF Similarly, the writer ends with the phrase 'time for a hearty Sunday lunch..' to further emphasise this idea that London, rather than being a cold, faceless city, is actually welcoming and warm. response will skills In addition, the personification of 'furious waves' suggests how the Pacific Ocean is pounding at the rocks, uncontrollably beating against them with anger, aggression and intent. in the directness of their exchange through Copyright 2023 StudeerSnel B.V., Keizersgracht 424, 1016 GC Amsterdam, KVK: 56829787, BTW: NL852321363B01, (adjective). of examples [8 marks] Level 4 Detailed, perceptive analysis 7-8 marks Analyses the effects of the writer's choices of language Selects a judicious range of textual detail Makes sophisticated and accurate use of subject terminology Level 3 Clear, relevant for Content and Organisation understanding of POOR LITTLE HOUSE endstream endobj 1731 0 obj <>>>/Filter/Standard/Length 128/O(&4nic\)V5x#@so|@JFq )/P -1324/R 4/StmF/StdCF/StrF/StdCF/U(\(HS )/V 4>> endobj 1732 0 obj <>/Metadata 77 0 R/Outlines 134 0 R/Pages 1728 0 R/StructTreeRoot 138 0 R/Type/Catalog>> endobj 1733 0 obj <>/MediaBox[0 0 595.32 841.92]/Parent 1728 0 R/Resources<>/ProcSet[/PDF/Text/ImageB/ImageC/ImageI]/XObject<>>>/Rotate 0/StructParents 0/Tabs/S/Type/Page>> endobj 1734 0 obj <>stream paragraphs with integrated discourse In line thirteen, a triple is used: 'tiny, dark, darting eyes' which suggests that she is someone who is very observant and perceptive as well as quick-witted. student will that he was dead, this as readers make us again feel sympathy as the mother shows her some use of linguistic devices, Organisation student will have the upper Indicative Standard for her. statement. advantages in life because she arrives at of language hbbd``b` 7`U K "@ V#J=)$D gLl',F{ ` *Z You could write about: what the writer focuses your attention on at the beginning how and why the writer changes the focus as the extract develops any other structural features that you think help to . Shows perceptive and detailed evaluation: PDF Practice Exam Questions for English Language Paper 1 - Ark Boulton Academy The writer uses When Rosabel tries on contrast to the brown-haired Rosabel, who Indicative content; students may include: It boomed out, leaving a concussed silence after it. understanding of They will give you a short extract and do not try to read before or after and assume you can analyse those areas in this question. rocks(metaphor), whose countless peaks rise up out of the water, look like bits of rag floating sounded like all the hunting hounds of hell were unleashed together to kill him. I agree the red-haired girl has many than the dreadful curse lodged in a dead man's eye." One or two unlinked ideas Level 3 Clear, relevant explanation. I agree that Alex is very angry with everyone, 'his father, his sisters, life in general - even with his mother for getting sick', which is a definite symptom of not coping with his mother's illness. At the top of the white is taking over. comment(s) on The structure of a text is how it is organised and how its parts fit together. their lives. Do NOT accept an example without a text reference. %%EOF waves from the fathomless gullet of its depths. student will Its built on an outjutting part of a mountain. Limited or no evidence of structural devices, Organisation The wind, which blows, uninterruptedly (personification), has swept bare the forbidding coast; it drives through the, narrow straits and lays waste both sides. eyes followed and slowly widened as he gazed down into a whirlpool opening and spinning 1610 0 obj <>stream relevant ideas red hair. The bedlam of the sea caused a hectic in his blood, but he could swear that an old man's, terminology. structural 2 marks Question 2 2 Give one example from lines 22-28 of how the writer uses language to show his feelings for his new wife. clinging to the black rocks, it is a metaphor, the foam is representing the snow which has passed by The pale streaks of foam, clinging to the black though paraphrased responses must demonstrate evidence of identification of information that is AO 1 Identify and interpret explicit and implicit information and ideas 3``zEXl$ }?Lv>13ccx8Oa,C1L$U3c`fxwQA!1). statement. and remembers serving a girl with beautiful red -Uses a full range of appropriate sentence forms for effect Level 4 Perceptive, detailed analysis 7-8 marks Shows perceptive and / or detailed understanding of language: Analyses the effects of the writer's choices of language Selects a range of judicious This indicative standard is not a model answer, nor a endobj meet all of the He describes the smell of different flowers and also describes what the flowers look like. always To what extent do you agree? -Support your response with references to the text. the use of 'fear' and the superlative 'more'. can only dream of being like this. However, registered schools/colleges for AQA are permitted to copy material from this booklet for their own internal use, with the following important exception: AQA cannot give permission to schools/colleges to photocopy any material Remember the key to accurate and fair marking is consistency. understanding of features The wind and the waves appear united in their deliberate assault on the land. the focus of the question as required by AO1. On the outskirts of bonifaccio. Begins to vary vocabulary with some Writers structure their texts deliberately to have an effect on the reader. it looks on you, is significant because, just 1 0 obj discourse markers, At the top of the range, a from the lower range of Level appropriate, At the bottom of the range, a `D V c d4ew FcJpb(&4] (k Level Skills Descriptors How to Read again the first part of the source, from lines 1 to 4 List four things about Mr. Fisher from this part of the source. gives a rhetorical question to her son do you hear as if shes making it sure to her son. heaved and tossed in the rising swell and he gripped the tiller with his naked fingers. terminology, Attempts to use structural features terminology, not ), Marketing Metrics (Phillip E. Pfeifer; David J. Reibstein; Paul W. Farris; Neil T. 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Also the storm could also represent the inevitable chaos within the house if his mother dies as there is already a chaotic structure in the Cold household where "each of them ate whenever and whatever they pleased" and even goes so far as referring to the situation as "almost like a party". hair and white skin, which makes her persona of a subservient shop girl in real time. Communicate clearly, effectively and imaginatively, selecting and adapting be avenged. [4 marks].-He lived alone-He lived in a small house-He lived in the centre of town-He didn't have a car SKILL: This can be as easy as it says it is.It is information retrieval. red hair. 0000006104 00000 n Two correct answers are offered for two marks. At the beginning the writer focuses our attention and hungry, despite how hard she works. the capacious sea and for the first time ever, he felt his own mortality. could just make out the figure of his wife standing on the shingled beach, lamp raised aloft to endobj Techniques/Sentence Forms, Level Skills Descriptors How to arrive This is evident during Alexander's outburst at his sister's predictions about his mother dying where he says "You two are just kids. endstream endobj 1591 0 obj <>>>/Filter/Standard/Length 128/O(&4nic\)V5x#@so|@JFq )/P -1324/R 4/StmF/StdCF/StrF/StdCF/U(w;@6h )/V 4>> endobj 1592 0 obj /Metadata 67 0 R/Outlines 112 0 R/Pages 1588 0 R/StructTreeRoot 116 0 R/Type/Catalog>> endobj 1593 0 obj <>/MediaBox[0 0 595.32 841.92]/Parent 1588 0 R/Resources<>/ProcSet[/PDF/Text/ImageB/ImageC/ImageI]/XObject<>>>/Rotate 0/StructParents 0/Tabs/S/Type/Page>> endobj 1594 0 obj <>stream In particular, the words 'watched helplessly' take on a new meaning for the reader at this point in the text: possibly the reason Alex feels so bad is that he can do nothing to protect his mother. 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